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Showing posts with label Narrative Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Narrative Writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 18 August 2020

Narrative Writing - The Talker by Taniela draft 7

This is part seven of my story. I have called it 'The Talker'. My inspiration is "Yoda has taken over Siri."
Immediately I ran back to my room, I tried and tried to call my mom and my big brother none of them answered, then i speed walked to the living room, i was really scared but the door was slightly opened no one was in there, Until BBBB AAAA AAAA NNNNNNNNGGGGGGGG They scared me I was so scared that i punched the air, they said “Happy Halloween” I said mum you're alive, until I saw Baby Yoda behind my mum I jumped so high that i fell on Baby Yoda, and I started to choke him then he also said… (can’t really speak) “Happy HalloweenIE” my mum was trying to get me off, I was manicured in this place, I kept on choking him, then he took of his mask it was a robot. Why (because my older brother had a school exam for his graduation) for today. From that day on I kept on asking my brother how did he hack my phone “hes just a robot a dumb” ( i said mumbulying) “huh my robot didn’t do that i never accessed him to. The end. Thank you guys! For reading my story about the talker I really really liked entertaining myself with this story.

Friday, 14 August 2020

Narrative Writing - The Talker by Taniela draft 6

This is part six of my story. I have called it 'The Talker'. My inspiration is "Yoda has taken over Siri."
So I checked. You wouldn’t believe your/my eyes. I saw him face to face, almost becuase he took a picture. It was kind of blurry . He was with my mum just standing behind her… with witha (struggling to talk) knife I couldn’t believe it… (I couldn’t say anything) I was afraid, angry, and furious. And also I thought is my mum going to die or is this some sort of prank, so i gently walked to the door, and gently tried to gently open it, but it would make this creacking noise (creak, creak) then it finally opened, i looked everywhere to see if he was there, then i went downstairs and i saw blood flowing under a little crack leading to the living room.

Wednesday, 12 August 2020

Narrative Writing - The Talker by Taniela draft 5

This is part five of my story. I have called it 'The Talker'. My inspiration is "Yoda has taken over Siri."
So I waited and waited until my phone was full, I was nervous but curious about if it was all real. Until vrroom my phone was charged, so I asked safari with a big man voice where is the” baby yoda” five times I searched him up but no phone calls or no messages. Until boom a light bulb was above my head saying “check your account on Facebook”, so I checked and then I saw a text from a man named unknown. It sounded a little suspicious, but I checked…. To be continued

Tuesday, 11 August 2020

Narrative Writing - The Talker by Taniela draft 4

This is part four of my story. I have called it 'The Talker'. My inspiration is "Yoda has taken over Siri."
“My real name is Baby Yoda still” , “no but Star Wars movies are just a myth”,” oohhh you saw me ai do I look good”, NO! You look adorable, “how dare you I will slice you with this lightsaber”, (Jackson mum wants you) (my older brother) “tell her im on the phone im speaking to someone” (ok i’ll tell her) wait!.. Is there food (no) “ohh dang ask her if she can get me something”. (Nahh) “wait... you didn’t tell your brother your real name huh so much for being loyal”. I tried everything to get him off but it wouldn’t work he kept on say things and kept on annoying me, until BOOM something my phone turned black i tried to turn it on until a charging sign saying charge. But I wanted to know more about are Star wars real and are they here to attack us. Stay tuned to know more!

Friday, 7 August 2020

Narrative Writing - The Talker by Taniela draft 3

This is part three of my story. I have called it 'The Talker'. My inspiration is "Yoda has taken over Siri."
I said “who is this? Or else I will call the Cops!” They kept on saying “Baby Yoda”, I kept on saying “I will call the cops tell me who you are”, they said I know where you live”, and also “I know you “Jackson Smith” (main character), “but your real name is Xavier Naden my real name is”… to be continued...