Narrative Writing - Taniela first draft

Today i am writing a horror story. today I have been (meaning of I is us) chosen to write a story. Here is my story. The pictue I am using is "Yoda is now controlling Siri. "

Here is draft #1 Everyday I like to use Safari as a tool to help me. Because I'm “too lazy to press anything”, that's what my mum tells me. I will tell you a story. A very, very, very… Scary story. So I was asking Safari………