In Te Wairua Pakiki 4, one of our reading groups is called Tama-nui-te-rā. Tama-nui-te-rā is the sun so our reading group all read the story 'How Māui slowed the sun' and retold it in their own words. Here is the slide by Alfonsus, Sani, Solomon and Vili.
Kia ora Te Wairua Pakiki,
ReplyDeletewe liked reading your slides about this story about Maui.
We liked the sun drawings on slides 5, 6 & 7. Did you draw these yourself?
from Room 8 @ Mangapapa
Kia Ora Saint Pius X. I have carefully read your story and noticed that the description of each slide was truly amazing! I really couldn't of made it better myself! Though it was tough to read on slides 2,3 and 5. maybe you could change the colour of your font to make it stand from the background. What were the challenges you faced during the making of all the slides? If not is there anything you'd want to do different? I hope you guys have a great week BYE!!
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Mariam at Owairaka district school in Auckland!
I am a year six in room 8.
Wow Room 5,You did a very great job of retelling the story!
I really love all the describing words and the Pictures.
They really stand out.
My next step for you is that maybe on the 2 slide Probably highlight or change the background,Because I can't really see the words otherwise fine!
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DeleteHI my name is Quan from owairaka school. I like your post because it is so good you put so mach on your post. The sun is cool when the boys were poling on the sun.Good bey
ReplyDeleteKia ora, Charlotte here from Owairaka district school in Room 8.
ReplyDeleteI really like the work By Solomon,Villi,Sani and Daniel.
But one bit of feed back is that slide 3 and 4 have the exact same words (as in mini story)but the colours, font and backgrounds are different (which is good that there different)
Any way go story telling!
Byeee have a nice day.
Charlotte!
solomons slide so boring that i fell asleep looking at it
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